This is so damn good. Simply out of this world. My goodness...you and your writing have reached a different level with this poem. This is top class. I love the line 'oblivious' of the world...like never before… I like other lines as well such as ‘unselfishly I give myself to you’. Too good an imagination… I can read it over and over again… this does not mean that you should not write one soon… in fact you should write often… You truly rock!!
This is so damn good. Simply out of this world. My goodness...you and your writing have reached a different level with this poem. This is top class. I love the line 'oblivious' of the world...like never before… I like other lines as well such as ‘unselfishly I give myself to you’. Too good an imagination… I can read it over and over again… this does not mean that you should not write one soon… in fact you should write often… You truly rock!!
ReplyDeletebtw.. i love this purple colour as well.. good change...
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